Hi everyone,
It's hard to believe that there's only 1 more class until final exams, isn't it?!
Anyway, your last blog homework is to post your group's completed paragraph from today's class. When posting your paragraph, please read the paragraph of the group who wrote before you, and give them a brief comment. I will read your paragraphs and give you some writing advice based on them at next week's class.
Looking forward to reading them!
Kris
Many university students are satisfied with their university. But, some students are dissatisfied and there are three reasons for their dissatisfaction.
返信削除The first reason is that there are many problems with the cafeterias in their universities. For example, the cafeterias don’t have enough seat and to offer healthier menu choices. Also, the students want another cafeteria to be built on their campus.
The second reason is that the buildings and facilities in their university are old. There not a post office, a bank and ATMs on campus. Actually, many students need them.
The third reason is that there are not enough computer and books in their library. The computer rooms are always full and the students need more. Moreover, because there are few books in the libraries when they need to look for information they are inconvenienced.
For these reasons, the university students have much dissatisfaction for their university.
thank for reading!! by shotara tawara,yuki tomozawa and hideaki nagai.
We feel the same way. University need to attack a lot of problem. Many university students entered university with a lot of hope. However not all of them are satisfied with their university. According to a survey, 60 percent of university students have complaints against their university. They insist that there are some things which need to be done to improve university facility. The first thing to improve is about cafeteria. Students seem to want it to develop the service, for example, adding healthier menus and setting another cafeteria. The second thing, students say that it is great convenient to set a post office, a bank, and ATMs on campus. They are certainly useful when they need some money or need to send mails suddenly. The third thing, students concern about university security safety measures such as more lights for darkness and security guards will be able to prevent risks. The fourth thing, many students claim making the toilets better. Most of the students frequently use the toilet. The finally thing, university interests should listen to student voices and do their best, and then students will live a full time. Thank you for reading! Yukie Nishioka and Ayano Hashiguchi.
返信削除We think so. University should try to grant student voices. Most university students are not satisfied with their university. They have some demands which should be changed.
返信削除First, most university students say that there are not enough seats in their university cafeteria. They want another cafeteria to be built on campus. So, if the number of seats at cafeterias is increased, cafeterias will be less crowded. If it realize, they will not feel unpleasantness.
Second, most university students say that their university buildings and facilities are old. They want their university toilets to improve, because it is dirty and smelly. In addition, they want campus lights to be more bright, because it is too dark.
Third, most university students say that campus surroundings is poor. Because there is no shop around campus, they feel that it is inconvenient. Generally, university students need a lot of convenience goods, clothes, foods for their life. So, there should be a lot of shops around a university.
In short, most university students are not satisfied with their universities. Their campus life will be more comfortable and convenient, if these dissatisfied points are improved. Thank you for reading! Nakashimo Chisato and Youko Nakamura.
We also think universities have various problems. And these problems must be solved.
返信削除University students have some dissatisfaction with their university. The first dissatisfaction is not having enough seats in the cafeteria. According to report The Student Association of Japan researched this problem causes students the most dissatisfaction. Because of this, it is difficult for them to find seats to sit in. Universities should improve this problem as soon as they can. The second dissatisfaction is not having enough menu choices. They may be tired of the menu since they have to select in limited menu. And they can’t have a well-balanced diet. It is not good for them to keep their health. The third dissatisfaction is old buildings and facilities. It is inconvenient for them to spend comfortably in their university. Old buildings and facilities cause inefficient classes. Also, like a toilets, it causes sanitary problems. It is very important for us to keep toilets clean in order to sanitize. It’s for these reasons many university students don’t have satisfaction with their universities. Thank you for reading. We are Hiroki Toyama, Narifusa Hashimoto and Takaaki Hayashi.
Your essay is clear and precise.According to a survey, more than 50 percent of university students have complaints against their university. Most Japanese university students are dissasitisfied school facilities.
返信削除First, Japanese university students complain that the toilets are dirty and smelly in addition to lacking of toilet papers and soaps.They can not be relaxed and don't want to go such a toilet.
Second, they often complain that there are not enough menu choices and seats in cafeteria.And, They want the cafeteria to offer healthier menu choices.
Furthermore, they want another cafeteria and rentaurants to be built on campus.
Third, they often complain that the computer rooms are always full-we need more!They want to use computer whenever it is possible.
That is to say, they insist that it is important enrich the facilities.Moreover, they want school to spend school funds effectively.
Thank you for reading!Shiho Nagai, Saki Nishihara, Natsumi Hashimoto and Kumiko Hayakawa.
We think so, too. The school funds must be effectively. And if the facilities are enriched, many students may be able to live their university life comfortable.
返信削除According to survey, students more than the half are dissatisfied with their university. Many students hope to improve about various things in order to live university life more comfortable. The first thing that many students hope to improve is about cafeteria. Because there is only one cafeteria in university, they hope to build more cafeterias and restaurants. Then, the queues for cafeteria may be decreased. Also, if the cafeteria and restaurants are increase, they may be able to choose various menus. The second thing that many students hope to improve is about conditions. There are few things which many students need in and around university. For example, they need a post office, a bank ATMs. And the number of computer rooms and photocopy machines are little compared with the number of people of students. In short, if various things which many students are dissatisfied are improved, students may be able to live university life more comfortable. And students who are satisfied with their university may be increased.
Thank you for reading.
We are Yurika Tomita and Yuri Nakamura.
We agree with your idea.
返信削除Actually, Shidai students also hope to improve cafeteria, don't them?
We want to feel university life more comfortable.
Many university students in regional Japan are dissatisfied with their universities.
First, university students complain about cafeteria on campus. They want more places where they can enjoy meals. Some of them want the cafeteria to offer healthier menu choices. They often feel the quests for the cafeteria are too long. Second, services in universities are imperfection. Most students need great services such as a post office, a bank, and ATMs on campus. In addition, they want rooms to rest and relax. They also want more computer. Finally, university students think their university's surroundings are not so good. The closet train station is too far away. There are no shops around campus. The university isn't open 24 hours a day, 7 days a week. Thus, students wish enough campus surroundings.In short, universities are dissatisfied with cafeteria, services and campus surroundings.
Thank you for reading.
Kaori Hatano, Shihori Nakayama, and Hikari Numata.
Many university Japanese students in regional have several dissatisfactions for their university’s service, for example old buildings, events and entertainment and poor campus. The majority of dissatisfaction is not toward to study, many students not dissatisfy for their university’s education.
返信削除In December 2009, the Student Association of Japan conducted a survey about university students’ satisfaction with their university. Refer to this survey about 40% students satisfied with their university, and the rest students dissatisfied with university. Some students’ request for a post office and a bank and more restaurants on campus, I guess they are thinking university is like an amusement park almost all the student’s discontent about university is a deplorable thing. Few students dissatisfied with university’s education program such as not enough teachers, no exchange program., but it’s a minority opinion. Why you are enter the university, please think it over once more, and apply yourself to one’s studies.
Thanks for reading, writing by Hirotaka Fujiwara and Daigo Yamamoto.
Many university students are dissatisfed with their university. Especialy, there are two main areas of dissatisfaction.
返信削除One of the area of dissatisfaction is pooring campus surrounding. It is very important thing for university students. If there are only a few buildings around the campus, they can’t enjoy themself. It is big constituent of dissatisfaction.
Another thing is that cufeteria has not enough menu choices. They are bored cafeterias menu because many students eat lunch on cafeteria everyday.
In conclusion, these two things cause dissatisfaction. If these things were improved, university students would be satisfied with their university.
Thanks for reading, writing by Reiji Terasaka,Yasuhiro Toyota,and Akihito Naito.
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返信削除Many university students are not satisfaction with their university in Japan. Their each reasons are difficult, but all the reasons about university. According to survey about Japanese university students in December 2009. 60% the students are not satisfaction. Most reasons are “Not enough menu choices”, “Safety” ,“Old buildings and facilities”, and “Poor campus surroundings” First, the student association of Japan dissatisfy with about old buildings and facilities. Some of them say it traditional thing, but generally speaking, most of the Japanese university students think that old buildings and facilities are dirty and smelly. In other words, they are not satisfied with their university. Second, most of the university students in Japan think that surrounding of Japanese university is no place which university cab play, use easy. To improve these problems, university should set in super, fast food shop and amusement park. Third, most of university students are dissatisfied about part of safety in university. Some years ago, a dubious character trespassed on a university. So, university student was killed. Therefore, I think that university student is uneasiness about safety. I think that to improvement about safety set in the front gate of university that can improve. As a result, a dubious character cannot trespass. All in all, Safety of students can protect. For these reasons, the university students have much dissatisfaction for their university.
Thank you.
Ayato Nakamura, Toshiro Nakamura, Yasu Hamano, Arata Hamasaki, Akihiro Hayashi, Kousei Hasimoto, and more.